Tuesday, 27 October 2015

Club fair

My sister, my mum and I were on the long drive to Blue Skies. We passed rivers with swimming ducks bobbing their heads in and out of the water.  We saw hills covered  in a lush pine forest. The smell of minty sap slowly filled the air. When we pulled  up to Blue Skies, I jumped  out of the car and ran to grass. In the distance, I saw a swampy fish po. nd. Then I ran, something had caught my eye. There was a gigantic pool with air-filled bubbles with kids rolling around inside. I lined up for a go. Finally it was my turn. I climbed in the ball but there was no air in it yet. I was sinking like the titanic. Eventually, they filled it up with air. I rolled around flipping around like a hamster. I banged into other balls like a bull dozer.

4 comments:

  1. Wow caitlyn. Some amazing words. I love it how you describe your self like a bulldozer it's a great way to make a picture in your readers mind. Well done caitlyn you are going to have a great future ahead of you.

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  2. That looks like a lot of fun. I'd love to try it, although I fear I'd probably hurt myself, the way you describe yourself being like a hamster and bulldozing into things.

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  3. Hi Caitlin I love your story the quality in your was great you change my mind I really want to go there hope you can right Some more ��

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  4. That look really fun and amazing words

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